Raven Blackhart

Alright so I like this one a lot and I think you really took some of the advice I gave you. I think the shading in the eyes looks so much more natural now, which I love! However on the face you could have done the lines a bit softer or lighter, but it's alright. On the glove and bracelet I think they are quite nicely done, and the fingers all look correct. For the shirt I think you could have perhaps made it have some dimension by having a bit more of a fabric look to it, and possibly having it be a bit loose in certain parts. The pants do look good and I think you did well on those. The belt looks fine, but I think if it was even a light shade of grey it would work better. The coloring/shading is a bit inconsistent since it is in streaks in a few places, but it doesn't look that bad! Well done!